Tuesday, September 27, 2011

Blog #5

For me I found it super easy to think of the topic that changed me. I found it kind of fun to write about my conversion to the church. I think that that paper is something that I will keep. I think that it is cool to have a little bit of that memory written down and preserved for my future genealogy, as a record of how their parents or grandparents got involved in the church. I never have really made my writing very descriptive before and I surprisingly really enjoyed doing that in this paper. I felt like my paper sounded more interesting and like a story, not just a boring paper. From writing this paper I also am a little more relaxed about writing long papers. This 6 page paper was not too difficult to write, but then again that was also probably because it was a personal narrative. It was also fun to just sit and brainstorm and think about all the good experiences that i had with my family learning about the church. I really liked being able to put voice in the paper. I felt like I could really explain the story being myself. I think that I was able to write and recall the story almost exactly how it happened by using quotations.On the flip side I still was confused on when I am suppose to leave the dialogue in the paragraph or when I indent and move it to its own separate line. In books that is how it is written so I was still not sure what the exact rules are when it comes to dialogue.

2 comments:

  1. Well Haley I'm glad you had fun writing your personal narrative and that it wasn't too terribly difficult for you! I would have to agree with you that it's very enjoyable to be able to put voice into a paper. Before now I have always sounded like an 80 something year old man. very dry and formal. Now throughout my paper (and hopefully my blog posts) I am able to put little bits of humor and other 'me-isms' that make it sound a tad more interesting. Anywho I am excited to be in your blog group and to learn from your insights on whichever topic we are assigned to write about.

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  2. Hi Haley! First off I would just like to say that I bet your paper was amazing! It sounds like you really enjoyed being able to write it down. I really liked writing down my story too. I had a great time brainstorming too! It was really fun to think back on all the note-worthy experiences I have had that happen here and there. I also thought that the dialogue was a hard aspect of the assignment. I also didn't want the dialogue to sound too planned. You know what I mean? I still wanted it to have that natural flow for conversation about it. Well anyway, I’m excited to be in your blog group!

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